A Day Out With My Grandma

I woke up at about 7:30 AM  and then my grandma came from Wind Whistle. Then we drove to Rangiora. Then we went to the Warehouse we got some lollies then we went to the Larissa Work. Then we went to the Movies. We watched Secret Life Of Pets. it was funny. After the Movie went hoped in the car then we drove to subway. After we got the subway we drove to a park to eat it. My subway was delicious. After i ate the subway i played on the playground for bit. Then we got back in the car and drove about half hour to the Cemetery. We went to the Cemetery because my great great grandma was buried. Last year she died. So we took some flowers to the Cemetery and put them into the hole that had water in it. After the Cemetery we went to the dairy to get a ice block. After we walked out of the shop and we hoped in the car and drove about 1 minute do the park. Then i ate my ice block  then i went to play on the playground. I played on the playground for about 10 minutes. After 10 minutes i walked back to the car. Then we drove 30 minutes to my house. When we got to my house i got out of the car and then i walked into the garage to get my scooter. I got my scooter then i put it in the car then i hopped in the car and we drove to the skatepark we were at the skatepark for about 2 hours. After 2 hours we drove back home then we just did some stuff at home.

The Calves Bad Day

The Calves Bad Day

“Today is a great day to go for a stroll in the African Savanna in October don't you think baby calf?” I said “Yeah” and we went to the river but I could see something and didn't know what it was.

I was walking along the river bank until Dad stopped and and yelled “Run back” because he saw a pride of lions. I ran as fast as I could.

I could hear them getting closer and closer. I lost my balance and I fell in the yucky water. The lions were pulling me out of the water. Until a crocodile came and pulled me too. So it was tug of war.

The lions won. I was still alive, I was just cut and scratched. My dad got some more buffalo reinforcements. Then the lions ran away.

I was rescued by my mum, dad, sister and brother. After I was rescued,I went behind Mum in the herd. while Dad chased the lions away.

I was so relieved that my Dad came back and rescued me from the jaws of the lions. I learnt my lesson to stay in the middle of the herd.

   

By Hayden

The cafls bad day (First draft)

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened?
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

First draft

The cafls bad day

Today is a great day to go for a stroll in the African savanna  in October don't you think baby calf. I said yeah and we went to the river but I could see something and didn't know what it was

I was walking along the river bank. Until dad stopped and and yelled run back. Because he sore and pride  of lions. I ran as fast as I could. i can hear  them getting closer and closer i lost my balance and i fall in the yukky water. The lions were pulling me out of the water. Until a crocodile came and pulled me to so it was tug of war. The lions got me i was still alive i was just cut and scratches.  My dad got some more buffaloes. Then the lions ran And i was out of the water. I was rescued by my mum,dad,sister and brother. After i got out of the water i went behind mum. Wiel dad chased the lions away.

I was so relieved that my dad came back and rescued me from the jaws of the lions. I learnt my lesson to stay in the middle of the herd.    

Battle at Kruger National park sequence

   W.A.L.T recall events events in order.

	The  herd of buffalo are walking along the river bank.
	A pride of of lions are resting in the sun
	The lions are getting ready to pounce on the buffalo.
	The lions are chasing  the buffalos.
	The lions are separating the calf from the herd.
	The lions pounce on the calf landing in the murky water.
	The enormous buffalos charged at the the pride scattering them in all directions.
	The enormous buffalos charged at the the pride scattering them in all directions.
	The baby Buffalo is rescued by the herd of buffalo.