My Facts About Mountain gorillas

These are my facts about  Mountain gorillas.  I hope you like them.  First I had to read an information report and highlight the facts.  So then I could put the most important facts on my mindmap using a chrome app named Mindmup. Now I'm sharing the facts with everyone.  This is going to help me do my final report

The cafls bad day (First draft)

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened?
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

First draft

The cafls bad day

Today is a great day to go for a stroll in the African savanna  in October don't you think baby calf. I said yeah and we went to the river but I could see something and didn't know what it was

I was walking along the river bank. Until dad stopped and and yelled run back. Because he sore and pride  of lions. I ran as fast as I could. i can hear  them getting closer and closer i lost my balance and i fall in the yukky water. The lions were pulling me out of the water. Until a crocodile came and pulled me to so it was tug of war. The lions got me i was still alive i was just cut and scratches.  My dad got some more buffaloes. Then the lions ran And i was out of the water. I was rescued by my mum,dad,sister and brother. After i got out of the water i went behind mum. Wiel dad chased the lions away.

I was so relieved that my dad came back and rescued me from the jaws of the lions. I learnt my lesson to stay in the middle of the herd.    

My Learning Goals

Battle at Kruger National park sequence

   W.A.L.T recall events events in order.

	The  herd of buffalo are walking along the river bank.
	A pride of of lions are resting in the sun
	The lions are getting ready to pounce on the buffalo.
	The lions are chasing  the buffalos.
	The lions are separating the calf from the herd.
	The lions pounce on the calf landing in the murky water.
	The enormous buffalos charged at the the pride scattering them in all directions.
	The enormous buffalos charged at the the pride scattering them in all directions.
	The baby Buffalo is rescued by the herd of buffalo.

My WW1 Diary 1

W.A.L.T describe what life was like for men and women in WW1 through a diary entry.